From: Ralph Ronnquist <ralph.ronnquist@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 11:58:34 +0000 (+1100)
Subject: editorial
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editorial
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diff --git a/readme.adoc b/readme.adoc
index 2721103..70a8e12 100644
--- a/readme.adoc
+++ b/readme.adoc
@@ -1,11 +1,10 @@
 About rrqnet
 ============
 
-This repository holds the sources for *rrqnet*, which concern VPN
-building over UDP transport. It operates at Ethernet level, which
-means it transports both ipv4 and ipv6, and it can thus be used for
-ipv6 over ipv4 tunneling, or ipv4 tunneling over ipv6, as well as ipv4
-VPN or ipv6 VPN.
+This repository holds the source for *rrqnet*, which offers VPN
+building over UDP transport. *rrqnet* operates at Ethernet level and
+transports both ipv4 and ipv6. Thus, in addition to plain ipv4/6 VPN
+it may be used for tunneling ipv6 over ipv4 or ipv4 over ipv6.
 
 MAN PAGES
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@@ -16,5 +15,4 @@ MAN PAGES
 Devuan Packages
 ---------------
 
-  * The *rrqnet* package contains the binaries and their man pages,
-as well as the utility scripting.
+  * The *rrqnet* package contains the binary, scripts, and man pages.